Work in progress

**Mandalores Fury** · Subject: Work in progress Sun Apr 13, 2008 8:19 pm

listen guys, this forum messes with stuff that ive done on word, so im going to continually make changes to the story.

if there is anything in the story that i have missed, please tell me

In response to my updating the story, i have removed it from the forums temporarily

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**Mandalores Fury** · Subject: Re: Work in progress Thu Apr 17, 2008 11:17 am

alright guys

i almost got most of the stuff fixed.

im gonna put it all back up as soon as the next chapter is ready, so about 3 days from now, it should be back.